Sorry to be so negative, but one can barely parse the LLMish introduction, and thosebcontrols seem like a half finished personal obsidian document.
Kind of weird coming from tao, I remember his math notes being quite approachable and well written.
A proper normie should take the game and make it about dragons and lasers and swords and robots and princesses to save in another castle and it could be a success, like slay the spire. Or maybe a zachtronics-like game. Or spreadsheet spaceships um excuse me eve online is a thing right?