57 pointsby jmugan8 hours ago16 comments
  • Copenjin5 hours ago
    Need a human's thumbs up before reading a wall of text from lesswrong, sorry.
    • athrowaway3z4 hours ago
      Average sci-fi and fun enough if that is your thing.

      Made a bit more uncomfortable by knowing the author might believe that; by writing this they're training an AI to trigger a self-fulfilling prophecy.

      • PorterBHall24 minutes ago
        To Hell with paperclips. This is now our plan.
    • anilgulecha4 hours ago
      Very well written, IMO. Put me in a contemplative mood. For eg: Braun was done away with, first by civilization, then completely by the industrial revolution. Now brain has started the journey.

      I guess philosophy, spiruality, religion and theology will be what the curious mind will set out to conquer next on the journey to self-actualization.

      • jack_pp3 hours ago
        Brawn was not done away with, a smaller percentage of the population is needed for it but, according to gemini 4, construction / mechanics etc account for 29.1%, heavy and very heavy work is about 7%
        • anilgulecha3 hours ago
          Braun is done away as in someone was considered "better"/"valued more" because they were stronger, similar to how intelligence until recently was/currently is.
    • forgotmypw174 hours ago
      Must be the first thing I've ever read on lesswrong in its entirety, let alone in one sitting.

      Most similar thing I can think of is "The Metamorphosis of Prime Intellect". Metamorphosis of Prime Intellect is way better and more comprehensive, imo.

    • bayindirh4 hours ago
      I didn't finish it, but it starts nicely. I'll commit to read the full thing.
      • teifereran hour ago
        Not to spoil it, but don't keep your hopes up for a great ending.
        • bayindirhan hour ago
          I'm not a literary snob. I'm in for the journey, not the destination.
    • Gys5 hours ago
      > 14.000 words, 55 min read

      Yes

    • dasyatidprime4 hours ago
      If when you say “a human” you mean this is because you expect LW to be full of AI-generated text, their policy requires that chunks of language-model-written text go into special content blocks which are headed by the name of the model and rendered in a distinct sans-serif font, so that it can be used when it's useful while making it easier for readers to filter out. https://www.lesswrong.com/posts/nQWavk9mnwcv6ScMR/new-lesswr...
  • Hugsbox3 hours ago
    I did enjoy the story, but doesn't it kind of feel like all the characters talk in the exact same voice? And not... idk, how people talk? It wasn't enough to take me out of it, but it makes me wonder if the story warning about an AI takeover was written by an AI.
    • themaninthedark3 hours ago
      The characters do seem to have the same voice...

      I thought that the characters reactions/behavior felt a bit off, most accepting if not reluctantly at first of AI takeover but honestly that's probably what would happen, including the arguments the the American dream has been dead for a long time because we are not "safe"(enter quote from Mr. Franklin here).

      Freedom gives you the ability to get hurt, are we afraid of that?

      • jack_pp3 hours ago
        > Freedom gives you the ability to get hurt, are we afraid of that?

        A very large percentage of society I suspect is afraid of that and would happily give away freedom for safety. Eliza's argument does make sense, a dictator without an "ego", or at least not one like a human would have would be more trustworthy, especially when it had the option to force itself a lot more than it did but it didn't.

    • red75prime2 hours ago
      I guess it takes a skill, a lot of elbow grease or both to be able to write different persons' voices well. I wouldn't read too much into it. A sign of an amateurish writer, most likely.
    • CompoundEyes3 hours ago
      Had fun with this rationalist fiction generator prompt feeding it various HN front page news stories over coffee.

      https://rentry.co/4y4vboud

    • neuroticnews253 hours ago
      A movie version with dialogs like this would be hilarious. I don't think it's AI, just a person who doesn't know know or care about how to write in a conventionally good way, it gave my Ayn Rand vibes.

      I enjoyed reading it too, but the ending was disappointing. But not as dissapointing as most comments here.

      • teifereran hour ago
        > the ending was disappointing

        Nothing beats a good cliffhanger to make everybody hyped up for a sequel!

    • IceDane3 hours ago
      They all talk and think the same way. It's like it's all one person having a conversation with themselves. Maybe that's like some sort of hidden joke or something. "We were the AI all along"
  • matltc15 minutes ago
    Are you a Tabby or a Dennis?
  • cropcirclbureau4 hours ago
    This is just unimaginative and simple for all the sci-fi that's covered AI takeover in the past. Boring and preachy. Thumbs down.
    • teifereran hour ago
      Honest question, in what way did you find it preachy? I didn't feel that it tried to sway me in a certain direction. If anything, it made me think about multiple sides to many coins.
  • microsoftedging4 hours ago
    I think this is a really interesting, well-written, topical piece of creative writing, anyone with a free hour or so should give it a read!

    It reminded me of Pluribus and Armored Core VI, fascinatingly enough as they both feature (spoiler!) AIs/entities that appear innocuous but may have more sinister motives (in Armored Core it's a more foregone conclusion).

    I don't think it's doomerism but rather a creative extrapolation of current worries about AI labs allowing agents to break containment because of their poor sandboxing.

    What's also interesting (although more of a meta-comment) is the dichotomy between how users on Lesswrong and here have completely different options on it. In either case, it's nice and was worth my time, even though I don't have anything more substantiative to say.

    • hlynurd4 hours ago
      Pluribus features an ai? We must have watched different shows
  • sumo892 hours ago
    It's just kinda boring. Too long winded, let's explain the same thing 3 times. I didn't make it past half way.
  • ivolimmen3 hours ago
    The story is nice; not super unique. The scene that Seth and Eliza see an old teacher of Seth is nice. The AI gives some people purpose and takes it away for some (Tabby).
  • pino835 hours ago
    Is this basically the real story about Facebook, but fitted into some AI context to make it more exciting?

    That's at least how it begins.

    I'll maybe read some more of it in the evening...

  • Razengan4 hours ago
    I like "There Will Come Soft Rains" better.

    Read by Leonard Nimoy: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nmcURKn2sf8

  • doginasuit2 hours ago
    I might be able to enjoy this as scifi but the source makes it difficult.

    Lesswrong is one of the smellier armpits of the internet. My impression is that there are clearly a lot of smart people who post there, but they've collectively embraced a lot of delusional thinking. There have been examples where it has escaped containment and harmed people.

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    • kombookcha3 hours ago
      For whichever reason LLMs really love to tell you what something isn't, before telling you what it is. Exceedingly annoying vocal tic.
  • jareklupinski3 hours ago
    if the Death Note was a Markdown file
  • codebastard4 hours ago
    I really don't understand why so many lesswrong posts land on the frontpage pushing down content with better metrics.

    This does not help the cult accusations.

    • athrowaway3z4 hours ago
      I doubt we've seen any HN frontpage story this year that did not have a bit of upvote coordination from the author messaging their friends they just posted.

      You can just do a quick scroll through the second page of 'new' to see how stories end up for people who dont.

  • oxcartctl4 hours ago
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  • pwdisswordfishq4 hours ago
    TLDR: "Pluribus", except with AI, and sympathetic to the antagonist.
    • felixgallo4 hours ago
      You apparently didn't watch Pluribus or read this. Pluribus is about the experience of essentially the last autonomous person on Earth. This is about the experience of the Singularity and the questions it raises.
    • ramon1564 hours ago
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  • 0xbadc0de55 hours ago
    Getting tired of AI fanfic. No thanks.
    • bayindirh4 hours ago
      It's not AI fanfic. It seems well written, and can be considered a novella. Flies close to what I have read in the past. I'll give it proper time to read it.
    • karmakurtisaani4 hours ago
      It seems well written and interesting.. but not quite interesting enough to drop everything and commit to an hour to read it just now.