Now that the main documents for the German version v8.1 and the Japanese version v8.1 are complete, and corrections have been made to the English text in v8.0, I would be grateful for feedback from this community.
I am not a policy expert or an economist. I previously worked in a factory, and the loss of a colleague to suicide has remained a central motivation for this work. The proposal was developed almost entirely through long-term dialogue with multiple AI systems (Claude, ChatGPT, Gemini, Copilot, and DeepL).
Due to the resource constraints of free‑tier AIs—where complex multi-part texts caused the AI to hit its limits or give superficial responses—I have restructured the proposal into three distinct parts to facilitate clearer analysis:
(1) Main Document
(2) Appendix: “Examining Bottom-Up Governance”
(3) Supplement: “Why I Wrote the TLBIC Policy Proposal”
Since I cannot fully verify the linguistic nuances in languages I do not read, any feedback on where the text feels unclear or unnatural would be highly appreciated.
Thank you for taking the time to read this.
Links:
TLBIC_Policy_Proposal_v8.1_EN: https://drive.google.com/file/d/104CAlw1GTsjAvLT4Ngxc6ajelOF...
TLBIC_Policy_Proposal_v8.1_DE: https://drive.google.com/file/d/11kC67H9u1YgvQG5gfxdvlJjcmrc...
TLBIC_Policy_Proposal_v8.1_JP: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1NI-NOqozTsth5CG96-kEGNF9yv3...
TLBIC_Policy_Proposal_v8.0_Appendix_EN: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1cmTacZ9ruEVEr7I8ZEuzJ7od-7Y...
TLBIC_Policy_Proposal_v8.0_Appendix_DE: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Fd4TupbGoNjFWmIWDIsV34jD5AB...
TLBIC_Policy_Proposal_v8.0_Appendix_JP: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1kWoxpiLl2u-59-q20xN910xIm3l...
TLBIC_Policy_Proposal_v8.0_Supplement_EN: https://drive.google.com/file/d/16pfAwZc1E-X8waY3pyf8XUTVY60...
TLBIC_Policy_Proposal_v8.0_Supplement_DE: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1wP3tSkUh5d7PKSKlY95ACWwmgII...
TLBIC_Policy_Proposal_v8.0_Supplement_JP: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1PImkzmThPi8RNrThyBgyT1RYohi...
TLBIC_Policy_Proposal_v7.0_TR: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1MtiNjQeQO9ilLuEFXwVeKgWOzec...
TLBIC_Policy_Proposal_v5.1_EN (Timor-Leste): https://drive.google.com/file/d/1_IiJZsSHRVuIfeHiaz6W_xu7sii...
TLBIC_Policy_Proposal_v4.1_PT (BR): https://drive.google.com/file/d/1ZdtVTbNQl5y4PlFiLvfmD7UxiU5...
TLBIC_Policy_Proposal_v4.11_ES:https://drive.google.com/file/d/1rumXwwBa79RgxNkBe9PoYSRUz6c...